Wednesday, May 4, 2011

One Wandering Ghost

Finished drafting Ping's story last night. New title: "One Wandering Ghost". Final count 8300 words, down from 9200. Still kind of long, for short stories these days. Don't know if it could get much shorter... we'll see what the crits say.

If you're on Book Country, I've posted it there for critting. Link to its page.

3 comments:

ali cross said...

Yay! Congrats!

Michael Offutt, Phantom Reader said...

Hello. On the critiquing circle what would you like to start with? I'm rather unfocused lol. Email me at kavrik@hotmail.com

Author Joshua Hoyt said...

Congrats on that it is so hard to whittle our "masterpieces" down.

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