Science fiction and fantasy writer L. Blankenship
I thought this was pretty clean. The pans of the two paintings in the middle (of warfare and the landscape for exiling Kate to a small village) were a little fast--had trouble focusing on the details of them and then we moved on. I also thought we need to stay on that last frame with details about the books etc for much longer. I didn't have a chance to read the whole thing before the still disappeared with the video player prompting me to replay. Best of luck with this!
Thanks! I'll try to slow those two down some more.When QT plays it, the last frame just holds... I'll have to see what KS's player does.
I agree with Bluestocking on the timing, but love the music you chose.*grin* So exciting!
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